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| xDistortedReALiTyx 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseI like this, it's simple and to the point, while letting the reader make what they want of it. Keep it up. --pammy--x3 |
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusebeautiful perfectly worded |
| A Raindrop's Shadow 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusecool! Shouldn't it be under the haiku category tho? I like it, but the word "flits" doesn't seem to fit in. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusevery descriptive but i think you could fit more emotion in to it. |