FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| HeartofCourage 2008-07-09 ch 1,  | abuseNext chapter anytime i like you story is so interesting... ahh i am a hopeless romantic lol i wish i had best friend like that |
| Aria Deloncray 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseWow! This was great! Please write more! |
| Le Tourbillon De La Vie 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuse^^ i know that i'll keep reading as long as you keep writing -waiting for more |
| Core Satiated 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseWOW. Very descriptive and well written! I am a new fan of romance and oneshots like this one is exactly the reason why! I love the electricity you can feel when you read something this intensely charged...you feel short of breath as you read on! These characters should be put into a full novel. I would read it! |
| The Silverdark Knight 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI don't want to rag on you, but I honestly wonder what would happen next. I really wouldn't mind seeing another chapter or story come out of this. I suppose the only downside would be the fact that there are probably a hundred fics this year that use this plot. |
| Pione 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseWOW. I like it. :) |
| NoieD 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseGood start AND ending, but I think it needs a sequel! |
| xoxhp 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseomgg. great story! VERY interesting. definitely got my liking. update soon =) |
| Cinead Roddy 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseHeaven and hell, huh? Love the story. Good job. |
| arix 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseYour last sentence is just beautiful. |
| SamanthaNicole 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, I have to say I really enjoyed this piece. The dialogue was great - very natural. Also, I have a thing for first persion POV, and you used it really well. Also, I found the story very relatable. I was in love with my best friend for six years, and only just got over it, so those emotions are still fresh, and it made this story even more believable in my eyes. The only suggestion I would make would be to go back and look over this piece for spelling errors. I know it's hard to catch them while you're writing (believe me, I know, haha), but a second or third look is usually all it takes to catch them. I'd originally been planning on pointing them all out for you, but there were a lot. But that aside, it was really, really good. Love, Sammy |
| Weirderest 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is really nice. A pretty brilliant read. A little more character development would be nice though, and the dialogue needs to be worked on. Also, i don't know, it was a bit confusing and went to fast at the very end. But i totally dig it. :) |
| SparklingStar25 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusewow!This is awesome.. |
| screamOftheButterfly 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was really amazing. The title made me laugh, and I loved the last line. I think that's one of the best last lines i've ever read. Great job! |
| Jevanminx 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI fucking love it, you could so make this longer, it suite either, but I would love to see Taylors reaction to what just happened, hehehe. JM |