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| Patrick Monroe 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuse"... and forget everyone, wash my hair in the rain and lean my head against the cargo..." Beautiful, absolutely stunning.. Keep up the good work. This poem makes me want to hop a train. I give you a solid A... |
| unheardmelodies 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusewhat i like about your poems is that they always keep me interested and willing to keep on reading. this one is no exeption |
| the big crunch 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuse"could learn to dance and dye my hair and be beautiful again, i'd grow brown in the sun" its beautiful imagery. |
| perpetual questions 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusei love the listing of options and sense of possibility. lovely. |
| ticktockman 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusegreat! adventurous! I love the style and the humor! |