Pretty; fertile snow was a phrase that I loved

I always feel awkward reviewing a haiku because the words themsleves are flexible; as is the reader's perception. I'm not sure that I understand the connection between dirt and doors, though there are many possible ones... Besides any of this, It is a very good haiku and gives the existance bit a very new twist

This is probably my favorite out of your collection.

I admire your haikus.

this ones pretty col

i like the word choice except for when you say "barren". to me i think "empty" would fit better, just my opinion tho

but otherwise it paints a clear picture =] good job!

very good! I really enjoyed this. I think that it's sad, but reflexs alot. I appreciated it! God job!

I like the last line because it seems very contradictory. Well done.

interesting...creepy in a sense with the whole blood mention, but still very visual and unique. Good work!!

~L

I loved it! The last chapter was the best because it made me feel sort of crushed. Everything was amazing, and so true...it got me to have another view on Life, Childhood, ect.
Maybe you should not divide it into so much chapters or add a little more to the chapters...

Amen. I understand completely.

Simple, powerful. I like it.

This is my favorite of this collection. It has blunt imagery (which I think you used well) and an air of mystery.

Flaran

This is thought provoking. Better than most which provide meaning immediately. I like the contrast of fertile and snow. Good job.