Reviews for With Death in Hand

Reviews For: With Death in Hand

lookin4nemo 2008-05-15 ch 1,	abuselol i was about to say! Very good piece! Nice description of the flutterby and "embracing" them. It is awasome how you can look through someone esle's eyes.
Moon's Poetess 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseGlad it's not a personal poem =) Anyway, it's amazing how you can write this so beautifully and descriptively when apparently you really aren't even thinking about it. Like it. A lot. 'specially like the words you picked out. What I found interesting was how you depicted the person speaking above everyone else... usually in these kinds of poems the speaker is rock bottom or below (sure it was you who used a similar metaphor at some point), this poem is different... Anyway, 'tis awesome. Only line I didn't really like was, "upon closer inspection, they are the tatters of my heart" - just the "upon closer inspection" doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the poem shrugs But that's just a personal thing ^^ Moon's Poetess
NotABanana 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseWow! I really like this - how you disguised the underlining theme of the poem. Much applause! NotABanana
Faith Adeline 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseI think this is an amazing poem. One of your best. I loved it. It's real, and I've been there so it's personal at the same time. Like, I can see myself thinking those thoughts, and I think that's a good thing for a poet to be able to do. Good job :) Faith
Piperspeanut 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt is very powerful poem. My friend Brandy, I told you about...the one that got shot, she use to tell me that suicide was a permanent solution to a temporary problem, but if it is true that people that kill them selves come right back into the same situation then it is a temporary solution to a permanent problem. Well anyway good job.

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