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| BeautyLiesInLovexx 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a beautiful story so far. Your emotions are so depicted very well. The last sentence, "Cold means numb," hangs in my mind because it is a feeling I am quite used to. It is excellent to be able to coax a reader in that way--fabulous job! |