Reviews for Smile You're Expected To

Molly Renaud 2008-05-18 ch 1,	abusei really like this one... Its like being in the spotlight, when all you want to do is hide... goodjob =] -Molly
Sick Lullaby 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseThis makes me think of that movie! but i dont remember the name :( it had dinosaurs, and being on stage, and they didnt like it, and blagh went on backstage! i like it :D when i read the Jump i picture you doing your wierd get all excited for a second voice nice job :) i would take out the and right before the with 911 already dialed part, take out the audience in the second line, the and before the hold back, the and before the let them catch you... the and between straight and your smile...the and between Still, and Look... Blend the Who are holding there breath, and waiting for you to fall together... the and between Drop and Immediatly (replace with comma?) then end with... Walk off the stage Let your tears fall They dont need to know what happens behind the scenes As i just IMed you, my english teacher tought me to hate the word And.
losing gracie girl 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseoh my god. this is probably ur most amazingest poem ever! yours until the wind changes, gg