Reviews for By the Silver Sun

Scarlett Wynter 2008-07-13 ch 3,	abuseI thought it was interesting how you described the fountain of youth as silvery, because usually I think of it described as golden. overall, a nice poem with good meter and rhyming :)
Isca 2008-07-11 ch 3,	abuse"Misty veils." Mystical imagery! "Here lies the Fountain of Youth." That line could be straight from a Legend or Myth. Keep up the good work! :)
paranoidteen 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseI find this really beautiful for the age old light us dark fights. The line "Swords had clashed, banners flown" left a taste of the medival era in my mouth. I love it! The last line is my favorite though.
brokencrystal7 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuselove it!! :D i love the title too. please come and read my story. i really am not sure about writing about it so i need someones review. i just really love everything about the poem. you are a great writer. bye, brokencrytal7
Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-09 ch 2,	abuseI like the first line a lot. I'm really interesting to see where you're going with this and where the spirituality is coming into play. Nice work!
Isca 2008-06-09 ch 2,	abuseI like the format and the flow!
Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-08 ch 1,	abusethis looks so interesting! I really like the title too. I lovee reading fantasy books (even though I usually just read poetry on fp) but I look forward to reading more of this. please update soon. :D
Isca 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseVery epic and majestic! Nice work!