 funnechick 2009-06-09 . chapter 7You know, as soon as you put in chapter seven's author's note that this story was going to be Sara/Osamu, I instantly wanted Sara to end up with Caleb...I'm way too hard to please, haha. And Osamu talks so formally, I find Caleb more easy to like and relate to. But hopefully that will change. |
 Maize 2009-06-07 . chapter 7I really love your stories, but PLEASE tell me that they don't die in the end and that they stay together (happy ending)cause I don't think I can take another sad ending. I.e. Osamu dies and Sara ends up prego and without him. I don't think I could take it. I cried so much from the other that I gave myself a headache. So if they do end up tragic and not together in THIS story please tell me to stop reading now and come back in the distant future to this story.
But otherwise, you ROCK at writing and I absolutely adore it. |
 MessyArtist 2009-03-30 . chapter 6 Update! I really like it! :D |
 Kylie1403 2009-03-15 . chapter 6*claps* *sque* sweety you dida KICK ** job with it! seriously! |
 Nyleve Nalloc 2009-03-14 . chapter 6I'm so lucky; two of my favorite stories got updated today. I'm liking the interaction between Osamu and Sara more, more, and more. You're really making them seem like such a natural pair, even if their butting heads right now. The spark is there. In the previous versions, it was there too, but I mostly saw it from Sara and not so much Osamu.
Now it's different.
More. More. More. |
 Kylie1403 2009-02-15 . chapter 5o0o0o i love it! and i bet he will love the music and then they fall is love and *sighs happily* tehehe |
 Nyleve Nalloc 2009-02-14 . chapter 5It's me - Eve [changed my name from Nefertiry on here.]
I am so beyond happy that you've updated me and started me with my much NEEDED *sharp look* Caleb fix. I'm very happy now. I'm also quite content with what's going in. I'm really liking this version more than the last. Your writing has matured like wine, and I'm really excited to keep looking into this.
Next time, I won't be so kind SO update soon.
[I know where you live, aha ha ha ha...] |
 codeimagine 2009-02-14 . chapter 5Its okay. :) I almost forgot what this story was about though... :P
Can't wait for next chapter! |
 UnfitForSociety 2008-10-03 . chapter 4I read And then they fell in love last year and I really enjoyed it. I'm glad you're writing about Sara and Osamu again. I felt really sad at the end. Did you stop writin Lullaby? |
 Kylie1403 2008-07-27 . chapter 4i lovw thT YOU rw doing this! I LOVE the rewrite and gah its so awesome! |
 Nyleve Nalloc 2008-07-07 . chapter 4As I told you, I liked this. Osamu's confession was so in character. He's cute that way. And being Caleb's No. 1 fangirl, obviously I swooned. ;D
I have a question. You and I both know how this ends. Why did you choose this type of ending? Why not happily ever after? And I don't mean for the reasons of a sequel or wanting Sara to have this or that kind of future, but more like what pushed you to try for anything but happily ever after?
=D More please! |
 Twist Their Emotions 2008-07-06 . chapter 4Interesting. I really like it and am interested for more. |
 Audiovisual 2008-06-07 . chapter 3oh, i like osamu like this, i really do. (is my reaction to the chapter all wrong? XD) i feel sorry for all three characters, though - sara, caleb, and osamu - since it's only chapter three and they're already 'D8' and 'DX' at each other.
i like reading about rika and shin. they seem cool - or at least rika does. shin's good in his own way. :)
can't wait to see your next update! i really don't know what's coming next! |
 Nyleve Nalloc 2008-06-01 . chapter 3Hey. I was going to send you a text message right now (3am) but didn't know if you were resting up, so I decided to include my apology for the lateness of this reply. I was in a cruise (casino) and couldn't use my phone... then I passed out from tiredness... so, yes. Thanks for alerting me and all =)
Osamu reminds me too much of myself because I too tend to blow hot or cold and get mad (and stay mad) at certain things. I do like this version more than the last because not only has your writing improved (not that it was bad, but practice makes perfect) but I can "see" more depth to all of the cast. It truly feels like... -home- now.
If you start a Caleb fanclub, then I am president. xD
I'm anxiously awaiting the fourth; you're doing wonderful, love. |
 Hex Amare 2008-06-01 . chapter 3 Hu... I'm stuck. My mind wants me to side with either Sara or Osamu. But both have kinda valid sides. I wanna see where this goes! More more! Bwahahahahahaahahahaha!
Luuve, Hexorz |