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| Midnight Owl 2008-08-10 ch 3,  | abuseYour characters are wonderfully welldeveloped for a story only three chapters in! ...and I sense ex drama. I love ex drama. :) |
| Iris 2008-08-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseNice ending. I like that there's a bit of mystery to who the guy is. And I love that Jess is a crazy driver. |
| stareyed14 2008-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseyour prologue was brilliant! lol. I've never really liked prologues, but you sure made it good! Yay! -stareyed14 |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-07-12 ch 3, | abusehm some mystery... ex-lover calling? or something more sinister, from her past? his job makes him off-limits? what's THAT about? general insecurities or a deeper, probing mystery...? well, i won't find out until you UPDATE! update please! love it so far! |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abuseYES! Just by reading the first page, I can tell that this is off to a great start, you are back, better than ever, and I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON! |
| The Banshee's Tears 2008-07-07 ch 3, | abusehaha love the new mystery you've added here and the hilarious old lady as well. my dad always jokes that "if you don't like your mother's driving, then stay off the sidewalk" so the driving antics of jess in this chapter made me crack up. |
| Dreams of the Stars 2008-07-07 ch 3, | abuseI'm so happy that you're back! I've missed your stories like crazy. |
| cbprice25 2008-07-07 ch 3, | abuseSufficiently intrigued. Looking forward to more! |
| faithful.dream 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abusei LOVE all your stories, theyre the BEST |
| cbprice25 2008-06-18 ch 2, | abuseHey, I like it! I'll definitely be on the lookout for new chapters! |
| Iris 2008-06-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseHaha, I knew that the bed was going to collapse. It was all a matter of when. Great chapter. O oh, just one thing that I thought you might want to know: In the sentence where you say "Angela had long since fallen asleep..." you call "Brent" Brad. I just wanted to point that out to you. Looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
| JammyMacca 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter, loved the bed collapsing =P Can't wait for the next one |
| Alenor 2008-06-04 ch 2, | abusehmm, very nice. |
| The Banshee's Tears 2008-06-04 ch 2, | abusehahahahahaha! LOveD the chapter...the bunk bed issue was so frickin funny. this story is great and the humour has me constantly giggling. great job! |
| Le Meg 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseGood start so far - wanting to get the hell out of dodge is definitely an easy feeling to relate to, and so far the protagonist seems believable. One thing, though: during your MA you work on a thesis; it isn't until the PhD until you begin the dissertation. If she is in a program that goes straight through the Masters and into the PhD, then her working on a dissertation can fly. If you've got questions about grad school generally, I'll field them - I'm doing that now. (May the Force be with me.) |