Reviews for Rant: Like a Seashell Cracked Sunday

Aquafied 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseit always seems so changing i cant find myself in it.
Nemonus 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseGood imagery and description of the moments in life when it seems we will never be satiated. I didn't like the possibly accidental and highly noticable rhythm "deceiving/leaving". "Seashell cracked sunday" is itself pretty, but I'm not sure what part of speech 'cracked' is supposed to be, and so the sentence was more confusing than evocative. Perhaps a dash or comma would clarify? This poem has its moments, but tisn't perfect--perhaps that's why you titled it "rant", and I'm sorry if you didn't want concrit for your rant.
molotovcocktailontherocks 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseI really like your writing style, it's pretty cool. Wow that sounds lame, eh, I'm tired, that's my excuse. ANYWAY! Good job! :D