Reviews for Places further Away

emeraude-irlandais 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuse"Be the release" made me think of one of those over-spiritual tv gurus, but perhaps that's my own context issues. I think we all have moments like this, and I just might take your advice the next time I don't want to be where I am. The line breaks are perfect, and even though the correct use of further/farther in this case is "farther," I think the colloquial "further" reads better and seems more appropriate. The whole poem almost sounds like a quiet song, or a chant, you know? Or maybe you don't, and I'm crazy (wouldn't be the first time I've wondered). At any rate, I love the contemplative, quiet tone.
Aquafied 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseinhale i wish this so much and yet i think i am just trying to escape myself
molotovcocktailontherocks 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseSweet and simple. Very nice.
JoshuaVanity 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abusenice wording! keep writing x