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| Landcaster 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseCunningly and eloquently crafted. I will not state the obvious, but the repetition of roses was the key to the poem I thought. The connection of fire and ash also suited it. And there seems to be a depth that eludes me. Quite good. |
| birdsfly 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, It was good. I liked it alot |
| Isca 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely Amazing! |