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| Eternity's Rain 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseIt's great. You can feel the emotions clearly, the doubt, and you can associate with that person. The uncertainty and conflicting emotions are so real. PS: Not that I'm martyring myself, but I understand how the person feels because I sometimes feel like that too. I bet a lot of people feel like that. Difference is: I've got mny special person who understands me like no one else can - my twin, so I'm luckier, I guess. |
| xLinkinPark94x 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseYou sound like someone I know from my school...Though I'm not sure. I'm not gonna be nosy though and actually ask because in truth, if this is who I think it is, I really don't want to know. I think we all feel like this once in a while. I sure do sometimes. You know what I do when I feel like this? Blast music in my room and dance like no one is around. That usually makes me feel better. Also, try to be more optimistic. You have NO idea the places it takes you when you're optimistic. If I weren't an optimistic person, I'd honestly probably be dead right now. So keep your held held high because there will be a great tomorrow for you. There has to be. Yes, even for you. There will be. =D You are very deep and I like that in writers. This was a great read and it shows how ** up some people can be. (not you, but I mean the people who use you and tell you who to be, you seem fine to me =D). -Kelli |