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| Dreaming Chica 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseI love this! You captured the emotion so well, and the detail was fantastic! I could imagine someone going through the actions and saying the words in my mind! Well Done! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| BeautyLiesInLovexx 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting idea for a monologue. It was very good! However, you should put it in paragraph form, because it is near impossible for an actor to work with this format. |
| ham337dd 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseIt's mildly interesting. But then, I know nothing about theater auditions. Good luck, BananaFelix. |