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| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseLovely piece. I like the alliteration in the last line of first verse and "doe-eyed sunshine" is beautifully descriptive. Good use of rhythm/pace. Great work. |
| miscellanea 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseReally amazing, you seem to be super good at capturing feelings of love. Your most incredible line: Doe-eyed sunshine, I know for a fact, that there's not way a male could move like that. Yes. It's so hot when guys can dance, keep up the good work! |
| creepy kiss on tuesday 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI love: "I’m not looking for something that can’t be found, it just can’t be heard, seen, or explained. But it is something that can be felt" There are so many things like that, and they're so frustrating because you can't really talk about them. I like this a lot, dancing is magic =]. |