You are probably rolling your eyes at my reviews by now wondering if I have anything sensible and constructive to say and I wish I could be more of a critic for you, but I just don't have the knowledge. What I will say is this is going on my favorites list because I am going to want to read it over and over again, much liked Crushed. I could just really relate to this - it reminds me of one of my teen (and pretty bad) poems, but you expressed it so much better. My favorite is the last few lines... 'and I watch, and I wait, and I hope'. You have no idea how hard that hits me.

Honestly I think the name "Sunlight" fits this very well.

Also, this wouldn't be complete without the second piece. The first was good, but the second really finishes it well.

I really liked these... which is apparent by my lack of something to comment on. They were pretty much perfect.

I put this in my C2 file. Thought you'd like to know.

-stix-