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kloun mannequin 2008-06-12 . chapter 1
wow, this part makes me think

But not even the grandest ray

Can keep the explosions from living again.


life is wonderful, and the things about the sun, explosions were strong,
stars.are.watching 2008-05-13 . chapter 1
Sounds just like our weather right now. ;) Anyway, I liked the comparisons you drew here to a battlefield. Nicely done =)
ticktockman 2008-05-10 . chapter 1
catchy title and an interesting veiw on rain, nice job, I am favoriting this one.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-10 . chapter 1
It has been raining most of the week, so I can definitely relate at this time.

I really like how you describe the sun here - 'It comes to quell the battlefield'. Very nicely said, because that's just the way it is if you think about it. (:
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