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Reviews For: Dirge of Symphonic Requiem

California Castaway
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseVery nice imagery and use of rhyming. Often times people who rhyme in their poems come across as sing-songy, but you definently did not do that. Nicely done!
LoKi 7000
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseThe use of describers painted a scene in my mind, mainly because it was so adjective heavy. I think a different rhyme scheme would have helped though, mainly because of format issues.
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