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| fatbird33 2008-06-01 ch 1,  | abusethere's some good word choices in here! |
| poison-hearts-xo 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI was enticed by the first line, however, the rest doesn't seem to equal its level of intensity. It's as though the first line and the remainder of the poem were written by two different authors. |
| Eve's Deception 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI must admit, the title made me want to read this and then the first line just me away. Amazing. Good job. |