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| plumblossom 2008-05-25 ch 4,  | abuseI don't think the quality of the writing in the first two chapters needs to be excused -- the proofreading, maybe -- Are we going to know what happened to Jayce's parents? |
| MerieLiss 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseIm hooked xD |
| Somewhere In Between 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseYay a new story! Awe I feel kinda bad for Jayce but so far I like him. He's got a good personality, if not sad and a bit "do it cause I have to." A great start! :) |
| LizLizLiz 2008-05-11 ch 4, | abuseVery cute story, so far. :) |