Sorry, I haven't read your story yet, only the description. I don't know why I feel the need to say this, but I think I'd like your title to just be "Crowbar" instead of sticking in "The". Don't ask me why. Maybe it just sounds more sophisticated? No sé.

I want more. Now. Please? Jayce's awesome.

This was one of the best things I've read so far on fictionpress.

I know this happens in the next chapter, but what kind of friend is Ally? I mean, if one of my friends did that I wouldn't just bail. Especially not a best friend of that long.

The first few chapter's quality was amazing. Some of the best stuff I've ever read on fictionpress. Update!

This is awesome. Write more, please.

Wonderful characterization in this story. I really like it so far. I agree with one of the other reviewers. I think some jealousy should be directed towards Ally, not just Chaz. Of course, this can come later if you wish. Good writing. Great story. Thankies!

Omg! i actually love this! there are a few mistakes but its not like rushed or anything and there is no instant smutt so yeah very nice story.

I actually registered on fictonpress for this story lol i wanted to leave you a review asking you to update soon and to add you to my alerts so...be proud XD

Anyway can you please update?

Gah! This is my new favorite story! Normally, I don't really like reading big paragraphs (because of my small attention span), but your story is just so interesting. I like the beginning, how you take the time to describe everything. I love Chaz's character, but I wish there was more jealousy--not for Allison, but for Chaz, hehe. I love your story anyway. Please update soon!

This is really good! I love the whole style and characters... and well, everything. The story just seems to come to life, which is unlike many fictionpress stories which lack that type of descriptiveness. Anyways, I hope you continue.

I don't think the quality of the writing in the first two chapters needs to be excused -- the proofreading, maybe --

Are we going to know what happened to Jayce's parents?

Im hooked xD

Yay a new story!

Awe I feel kinda bad for Jayce but so far I like him. He's got a good personality, if not sad and a bit "do it cause I have to."

A great start! :)

Very cute story, so far. :)