I love this piece! It was very empowering, and I admire the fact that Amy was able to have the courage to reveal her hidden feelings.

That was rly awesome! I LOVED IT D

Sweet. I love how she's so strong and determined and gets her feelings out in the open! Good job!

Nice job!

It was very well written.

Oh my god...that's all I was thinking reading this because...

First off, this was a pretty good story. The way you told was pretty good, and enjoyed it.

Second off, you say it's not based off a true story, but this reminds me alot of what's going with me&a friend of mine...

This was a good story.

SIGH...good for Amy :)

xx

you know, you can make this into either a full length story or add one or two more chapters - perhaps to see how Jack would respond. Because as much as she wants happiness - she still loves him, and it would be nice if she got closure.

Of course me being hopelessly romantic, I would want Jack to realize what an idiot he is and begs her back, hehe.

but this was nicely done nonetheless.

Gosh, i love this story :)

Seriously, a lot of ppl say that it's depressing to read stories that don't end with a "happy" ending, but i really like it.

it makes me feel...hopeful? i'm not sure. but instead of making me sad and depressed, i felt enlightened. no, that's not the right word. i don't know WHICH word to use.

see, your story did that to me.

so i'll just say that it was written very well.

DixieAusten

i have to say i really dont like any stories that dont have happy endings between the main characters (aka they usually get together)

but this story was AWESOME!

i absolutely loved it to pieces

the first story of its kind that i very much enjoyed

the ending and the ideas were unique

the emotion for this was brilliant

really well done

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That was so gorgeous...it was everyone wishes they had the strength to do, but didn't have the guts to. No, I'm not speaking from personal experience either. :) But I really liked all the emotion that was in it, and how as she was talking, Amy was healing herself. The overall message was very nice.

One thing that I think you should work on is your use of the word "I". I know this is from Amy's point of view, but "I" starts almost every sentence. Mixing it up a bit would improve the style of the piece.

But overall, excellent work! :)

The "watermelons for a chest" part was funny.

"Child-less" can be spelled "childless".

The ring part and the ice cream part was very cute in expressing how much she liked him. I like how she confronted him and tried to move on. Nice work.

Twilight Starr

You go girl! Yep, I always wished I had the balls to do something like this. Sadly however, I am a girl.

Excellent story, very well written and (in my opinion)very true to life :)

love it

god why did she give him her number!

she shoulda just left him in the dust.

gr.

but i loved this no matter how it ended, it was well written and thouhgt out. i just didnt get the part where it was like

call me if you ever want to just...talk.

what else are they gonna do?

have phone sex?

just sayingg.

i wish it had more ephasis, like more movement, like her watching him while he says it, and a little more dialouge between the pair. but great job!