|Reviews for Moving On|
| Beautiful Destination 12/25/09 . chapter 1
I love this piece! It was very empowering, and I admire the fact that Amy was able to have the courage to reveal her hidden feelings.
| SunsetRainbow 10/9/09 . chapter 1
That was rly awesome! I LOVED IT D
| Stuck in Silver 7/17/09 . chapter 1
Sweet. I love how she's so strong and determined and gets her feelings out in the open! Good job!
| annoyance 5/31/09 . chapter 1
It was very well written.
| FreeLoop 5/5/09 . chapter 1
Oh my god...that's all I was thinking reading this because...
First off, this was a pretty good story. The way you told was pretty good, and enjoyed it.
Second off, you say it's not based off a true story, but this reminds me alot of what's going with me&a friend of mine...
This was a good story.
| I Murder on Impulse 3/18/09 . chapter 1
SIGH...good for Amy :)
| Fayre Meira 1/18/09 . chapter 1
you know, you can make this into either a full length story or add one or two more chapters - perhaps to see how Jack would respond. Because as much as she wants happiness - she still loves him, and it would be nice if she got closure.
Of course me being hopelessly romantic, I would want Jack to realize what an idiot he is and begs her back, hehe.
but this was nicely done nonetheless.
| meduse 12/7/08 . chapter 1
Gosh, i love this story :)
Seriously, a lot of ppl say that it's depressing to read stories that don't end with a "happy" ending, but i really like it.
it makes me feel...hopeful? i'm not sure. but instead of making me sad and depressed, i felt enlightened. no, that's not the right word. i don't know WHICH word to use.
see, your story did that to me.
so i'll just say that it was written very well.
| RoseLife 11/25/08 . chapter 1
i have to say i really dont like any stories that dont have happy endings between the main characters (aka they usually get together)
but this story was AWESOME!
i absolutely loved it to pieces
the first story of its kind that i very much enjoyed
the ending and the ideas were unique
the emotion for this was brilliant
really well done
| blurrylights 11/9/08 . chapter 1
That was so gorgeous...it was everyone wishes they had the strength to do, but didn't have the guts to. No, I'm not speaking from personal experience either. :) But I really liked all the emotion that was in it, and how as she was talking, Amy was healing herself. The overall message was very nice.
One thing that I think you should work on is your use of the word "I". I know this is from Amy's point of view, but "I" starts almost every sentence. Mixing it up a bit would improve the style of the piece.
But overall, excellent work! :)
| Twilight Starr 8/6/08 . chapter 1
The "watermelons for a chest" part was funny.
"Child-less" can be spelled "childless".
The ring part and the ice cream part was very cute in expressing how much she liked him. I like how she confronted him and tried to move on. Nice work.
| stunninglyaverage 7/20/08 . chapter 1
You go girl! Yep, I always wished I had the balls to do something like this. Sadly however, I am a girl.
| d666lisa 5/17/08 . chapter 1
Excellent story, very well written and (in my opinion)very true to life :)
| SparklingStar25 5/12/08 . chapter 1
| duckliy543 5/11/08 . chapter 1
god why did she give him her number!
she shoulda just left him in the dust.
but i loved this no matter how it ended, it was well written and thouhgt out. i just didnt get the part where it was like
call me if you ever want to just...talk.
what else are they gonna do?
have phone sex?
i wish it had more ephasis, like more movement, like her watching him while he says it, and a little more dialouge between the pair. but great job!