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Reviews For: Snake Escape: A true story

HorrorFeedGirl96
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abusevery funny...it made me smile...nice chose of words!
Sebastian Osprey
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseI sympathize with the snake.
Osprey
Tranquil Thorns
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseVery amusing. =P

This reminds me of the time when we had lizards. We were supposed to feed them crickets, and every once in a while the box of crickets would fall and crash open and the crickets would be all over the place.

One thing. 'she sheiked at me' - I think you meant 'shrieked'?

Anyhow, awesome work!
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