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La Terraza
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseI really like this. I wasn't sure if I was going too, but their were a couple of lines throughout that changed my mind.
Such as,
"she doesn’t smile much but she sings",
"with clipped wings that still wish to fly
tears in my eyes that I cannot understand",
and the last stanza.
The last stanza was beautiful.
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