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| La Terraza 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this. I wasn't sure if I was going too, but their were a couple of lines throughout that changed my mind. Such as, "she doesn’t smile much but she sings", "with clipped wings that still wish to fly tears in my eyes that I cannot understand", and the last stanza. The last stanza was beautiful. |