this almost fully explains what i went through with alex. i could never write it down or type it or anything it could only come out in tears.

the only diffrence is he is gone and your guy was there.


why are boys so dumb? and mean? and think with their dicks a lot of the time?

i won't say that this was written very well because you already know that already, and your right, i don't really have anything to say on it, because i am here to listen, not to tell you what to do. I'm glad i could lift your spirts up when you were down, even if it was just by telling the truth. and whenever you are feeling down, just remember you need to, not what everyone wants you to, because you write the truth, that when you have nothing to lose, you have everything to gain. =D

See you sunday!
T.S.S.

I liked this. Very good. There were some problems with tenses, and little things like that, but the content is real. It's something that a lot of people can understand. Great job :)
Faith

Wow. I have to say this story is pretty intense. There's something so personal about how you've written this story. I've even jumped into the conclusion that maybe the writer(you) and the protagonist in this story is one and the same, because of how personal and intense and how REAL you've written this one-shot. It's so raw. It's like what you're writing is just exactly the manifestation of what you're feeling yourself in a very very literal way. You're not hiding anything or disguising it. It's very unique, haunting but compelling at the same time. Keep on writing.

I really liked this story, mostly because of how well you described the emotions felt by the protagonist. When I read most stories I find the authors describe feelings as if they themselves had never felt them, or their descriptions just don't properly credit those feelings. When you were describing how the protagonist felt, it really reminded me of some of my past feelings, and in that respect allowed me to really connect with the protagonist. Its that kind of thing which definitely helps me enjoy a story.
Overall the story was very well written, in my opinion. Just for creative criticism though, I did feel the story could have used a bit more meat on it. There was nothing wrong with the content or the length, I just feel that there was much potential for more story, within the story.
Adding to favs, and keep up the great work =]