Whoa, that's cool. Wasn't expecting an anagram-poemy thing, but it turned out really nice :D

way to make me use the dictionary, too. I had to look up appentence, haha! (it's good though; involved reader involvement! or something. :P )

Thinking about it, it's semi-weird that every line has more than one word except for the last line. *shrug* I'm never too picky about such things, though, so it's a judgment call on that.

*geeks out* it sounds like something that might be chanted or said at a dramatic part of a play/musical/whatev. Neato! I love stuff that sounds dramatic. XD

I really like it, though. _

-ef review-

Sheriff