Wow this is moving really! A different lookout on things I suppose and it makes me wonder what the hidden reason of our campus tragedy was...Great work!!

Not bad for a first attempt at flash fiction; a few mistakes here and there that could easily be corrected if you gave it another read-over or two. Check the first few paragraphs in particular.

It's funny how the same basic plot can be executed in different ways; I did a first-person story that followed a similar "I killed a person to save the person," but mine's not exactly flash fiction. Anyway, the two stories are completely different in execution and style.

Nice job!

...wow, that was awesome! kinda scary how we have people like that in the world.

Great work on this one! I love how you fictionalized these events--very nicely done. And creepy, considering the third floor events. I liked how you spoke through the character and to the character--that's one of my favorite ways of writing flash because it's so easy to capture all the thoughts and fragmented flashbacks without being removed from the moment.

I can't wait to see you write some more of these!

It's also great to be reading your work again. I know I haven't been very productive on my sites as of late, so I know how that is...Great job, Kimmi!

that was awesome in that holycrapthatwasreallyfreakingcreepybutiloveditanyway kind of way. well written, if not a bit, erm...strange.