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| Nothing In Blood 2008-07-13 ch 17,  | abusei love the set up of this chapter |
| Nothing In Blood 2008-07-13 ch 14, | abusestress during exams is also bad with cutters. in my freshmen year in highschool, eams were impossible because when i got stressed, i cut. when i cut, i got stress and i chouldn't study. it was a never ending cycle of stress. |
| Nothing In Blood 2008-07-13 ch 9, | abusethis poem is my favorite so far. i kinda understand how it feels. i have a slight eating disorder (i like to eat wierd things like candles and paper) and i have gone through spells of fasting, and that was how it felt. |
| KatieTheWriter 2008-07-02 ch 17, | abuse:( Sad. Update soon please. ~KatieTheWriter~ |
| Raye12307 2008-07-01 ch 17, | abuseI know exactly where you're coming from. Except, I've never seen anyone capture it so perfectly. The pride, the self-hatred, the hip-bones, the BMI fixation, I've been there. Now that school's over and nobody's watching me eat, I've been slipping back into it, and have never felt more beautiful then when I'm starving to the point of dizziness and can see my ribs, hip-bones, and bony, scarred wrists. I've never felt more powerful and in control than when I passed out from hunger and got a scar on my chin that will never go away. But the thing is, I can't write about it like you can, even in my own journal. I write about the outside, fluffy stuff that goes on, and only occasionally allude to the crazy shit inside my head. You have a gift. Please keep writing, there are so many of us who need you. |
| fairytale failure 2008-06-30 ch 17, | abuseLOVE the format in this chapter. The double meaning gives it so much feeling, and I especially liked the ending. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-29 ch 17, | abuseLove the formatting. Great addition. Keep up the good work! Have a marvelous day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-24 ch 16, | abuseGreat addition. Have a fantastic day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 14, | abuseAh, exam stress. I really don't get stressed out about tests, but tons of people have test anxiety. They can relate to this. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 13, | abuseI would hate to be this girl. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 12, | abuseGood job on telling a story. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 11, | abuseGreat addition. What else can I say? ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 15, | abuseGreat addition. I like all the show of the insecurities. Have a brilliant day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-13 ch 10, | abuseGreat addition. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-13 ch 9, | abuseWonderful job on description. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |