|Reviews for Shadow's Glare|
| BookOfSpells 6/9/08 . chapter 3
I like it but I got confused...
| BookOfSpells 6/9/08 . chapter 2
I really like it! I guess it would b have to read more though.
| misery sister 5/12/08 . chapter 1
Okay. You want to capture your reader's attention on the first line, make them want to like the story. If your first line says "I DONT' KNOW WHAT I'M WRITING", what do you think your reader will think? It makes them not want to read it. Happened to me - I just wanted to tell you so.