I love this piece because you were able to get so much after something as simple as a bowl, that's just awesome.

I also like the last three lines because it was quite funny, though morbid.

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I like that. It seems like a poke at pretentious assignments, but at the same time, a reaffirming of them. If that makes sense. The end is just phenomenal. Really intriguing write. Keep writing! :)

That was nice. I liked it, and the concept was really original. I like how you narrate it so that it sounds very personal.

This made me laugh, I have no idea if it was supposed to, it probably wasn't, but it did. Very cute, good job.