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Reviews For: YOUR LITTLE GIRL

The Grey Detective7
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseIt’s pretty good, I can imagine it. My parents are like that, but less extreme. A couple of spelling things.
It’s now… now.
It’s angrer not angry
Fairybrat
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuse...Wow?
I really don't know how else to express my feelings for this through little black letters. It's so...full of emotion. I can relate, partially, to the parts about sacrificing things for myself to keep the home life saner and safer; it's not a fun thing to do, but if that's what it takes to be happier, then that's what a girl's gotta do, right?
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