i like it!
can't wait for the next chapter (:

Wow... again. Another story. I'm beginning to think I read to much. This story... is absolutely wonderful. It makes me sad that it's not finished, but I'm prepared to wait faithfully for each and every chapter! Because, that's what I good fan does. They support the authors that they are fans of. And it's a secret... so you can't tell anyone. But...(I'myourbiggestfan!) SH! You can't tell anyone. They might get jealous... if they were to find out (I'myourbiggestfan.) Hide it with your life.

dude kewl story..but are you going to update soon? i love how kevis so awesome/ crazy!

It's pretty good! but its 'vou voulEZ' ( my first languange is french so I know this for a fact)

Oh no! He's straight...how tragic :( I'm excited to see how Kev actually gets him.

Fuck, that was.. harsh, to say the least. (Love Muffin's little joke about secretly liking him.) D: Thankfully Kev can bounce back/go all add.
If someone had joked like that to me I woulda been fucked up haha XD

This is a great storyy~ Kev's personality is tres tres bien. He reminds me of me a little, just more add! Man, french boys.. m.
I'm glad I found your writing~

Koyu, I like this story. Apart from a couple spelling errors, it's cute, and it's fun.

As to the review, I sent this in a PM to the person who wrote it to you - and I wanted you to know what I wrote, so that you won't get accused of sending someone to bully them:

"Squeakins squeakers,

I've recently read your review of Turbulance by Koyu - can I ask why? Why you feel the need to insult someone's physical appearance or their shopping habits instead of sticking to the writing? Perhaps her story isn't the most complex novel on the site - but that's not the point of the story, and it is nowhere near the worst.

You must have very low self-esteem, not having anything of your own written here. Are you incapable of taking critique? Or are you simply illiterate? Do you get bullied in school? Have abusive parents? Are you obese, or just bitter? You have no right to talk to anyone like they're less than human, or as if their feelings don't matter.

You're cruel and fucking pathetic, dissing someone online because you don't have the fucking balls to deal with your goddamned problems. You disgust me, you fucking coward, and I really hope it made you feel good to tear someone down like that.

You honestly think you're that clever? That you're hotshit for what you said? Hah. Come on, only an uncreative, jealous dumbass starts making personal attacks on people and to me, you're the sterotypical, spineless, immature jackass who hates himself or herself SO MUCH that you can't help but rip other people down.

It's embarrassing. Get a fucking life, why don't you?"


Basically, I completely disagree. I know that it's really hard when someone is that cruel for no reason - but you should know that it's utter bullshit. There's a reason that person doesn't have anything on fictionpress, he or she probably can't string together anything resembling a plot. Some people are just mean, they have serious self-esteem issues and they're incapable of being decent human beings.

Don't ever buy into it, none of it. You're a great writer, I love reading your work, and I think you're pretty fucking brave to write things and offer them up to the world to review or critique. I have nothing but the highest respect for you, and I sincerely hope that you don't give that bastard the satisfaction of upsetting you. Criticism and insults like that are always hard to deal with, I know, but it doesn't matter. That person doesn't matter, has nothing to do with you, and it's not your fault.

Aside from that, Wil is the cutest thing ever, lol.
Yours,
August

Bwahaha. I love Kev. Keep it up, hun :)
Faith

Aw bad Wil, he's evil and not gay... yet =D

Please update soon, I really want to find out how those two get together. UPDATE XD

hahaha This story is so funny, I read the reviews before I read this story, and there was this really weird one that kinda flamed you. Scratched that, it was a full on flaming thingy ma bobby. So I was kinda reluctant to read your story but after I read it. Wow!

It's so funny, sometimes a bit confusing cause I have no idea who Kev is talking to. But otherwise this story is just freaking awesome so far!

Kev licked Wil! =O Cuteness! Update soon please. I'm stealing my friend's profile to review cause I just love this story! Update asap please!

SEXY. SEXY KEV LICKING SEXY WIL IS VERY SEXY.

Yes.

Thank you for being awesome.

Is there someone specifically you had in mind when envisioning Wil? It's a challenge for me to imagine a curly haired Asian boy...

Great job!!

Aw! Piggy back ride for a cute Asian!

(Read that nasty review...I was appalled by it. So I checked out that person's profile. That person who hasn't written a damn thing his or herself (unless my computer didn't show the profile...). And I laughed at that person and mentally cussed them out for sending you a nasty flame probably based off his or her own insecurities.)

I LOVE THIS STORY. Just so you know, again. It's really quite adorable and has that cute little ADD quality. Keep writing, please?

I'm so ridiculously psyched you updated this...see, I'd forgotten what it was called, so when it came up in my emailed alerts, I kind of looked over it...then I was like, I wonder what ever happened to Kev. And then it was like WHOA KEV IS BACK YAY! And there's more! So I'm happy. ADD! (add)

Anyhoo...there'll be a real review from me soon enough...

i love this story so fing much like srsly its soo cute

Me loves Kev :) lol. Good job. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Faith