Reviews for Autumn Lunar Eclipse

mikey magee 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseI like it! The use of personification with the moon in her gown create a nice image. Your word choice is also stunning. But I can't really see where the poem is going. What are you trying to say?
Monogurui 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseHmm, not bad, kinda abstract but not... Could almost make a hiku of this.