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| LittlePony 2008-05-12 ch 1,  | abusethis is awesome. really good use of imagery and yeah, nature linked to human stuff, emotions, nice work. it was pretty chilly too. i cant say anything bad about this poem but maybe if you broke it up a little, also i love the one word lines, really add to effect. ok i think thats all, thanks for posting:) |