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| Purpose 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI wonder what a Gothic chef cooks? I'm thinking eel hm. That's an interestingly different haiku! |
| Cloverless 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseWell, technically, it's not really a Haiku because it doesn't deal with nature. That little blemmishing detail aside, it's not a bad poem at all. It's definitely contradictory, but I'm to assume that not without deliberate intent and forethought. I suppose that I took from it the desire of individuality, and the urge to express the multiple dimensions of the character, instead of the single dimension that teenagers so harshly label others with. It's an interesting poem, to say the least. |