Short

Simple

yet Sweet, and quite endearing :)

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NICE POEM! :) thumbs up..

As I browsed the Just In list, I came across this title and summary. Midly intrigued, I did not expect such whit and emphasis. I love it when that happens. ]

The first thing that caught my eye was the bolding and italics. I am a fan of formatting; I really think it helps poetry along. I like your word choice because it helped the flow, which by the way was great.

I like the imagery as well. "Looking down at this colorless sink" was a pretty cool line.

This is a great piece. Keep it up.

-stix-