I think you have become favorite author, lol. This story is so well written, despite your protests to the contrary. The plot is engaging and flows really well, and the twincest is really great, too! ^_- Keep up the great work!

Oh my GOD! I love this story SO MUCH! I laughed so hard!

Oh, my gosh, I read the warning and was like, "I HAVE to read this story!" XD I will definitely follow this one!

Mrow! Things were getting a little heated there! I like the chapter, but the whole bit with Sabrina and Anne explaining about the boys' powers, it was kinda confusing. Maybe rewrite it or something? Dunno, but I'm looking forward to the next one! Update soon, please!

Fangbanger

very good work!

i almost forgot this was fantasy until i got to this chapter.lol

Their mom is so cool. This is like the only incest story where the mother is ok with the relationship. I love it! Pleaes update soon!

So far, it's an interesting story. I can't wait for an update.

wow this is such an AWESOME story! can't wait for the next part, with what will happen with Sam, the whole witchcraft thing, and the relationship between Damian and Kyle! So keep up the good work!

I think this could be really interesting and a good story. I like the little cliffhanger at the end there, it makes me want to see what happens. There are just a few things that iff me.

The biggest is paragraph sizes. Some of your paragraphs are HUGE and an eye sore to read. I'll be honest, I skimmed those. Try breaking them up. At most a paragraph should be seven sentences, but typically shoot for five.

There are a few miss spelled words, like couch instead of coach, or the last sentence where Anne says "curiouser and curiouser" that doesn't sound right (mostly because it's a miss spell). It would have been better to say “It just gets more curious, doesn’t it?” or something along those lines.

The only other thing that kind of bugged me is that you don't get to see a lot in Kyle and Damian's relationship. They happened so fast but then you don't really show anything about their relationship besides the occasional kiss. I'm sure more will come out farther down the story though.

Other then those, I really liked the story and can't wait for an update!

ahh what a cruel place to leave us hanging! I love the 'kiss and make up' line, although I bet Mom got a bit more than she expected!

OMG! What is with the heartbeats...? I think i'm missing something >.<
I love Kyle, this last chapter was the best. Please update or i may die...
Then my readers will be angry because i will not be alive to update (not that they aren't already angry at me for taking so long to update...) and that is a slew of people that aren't very nice...

So Update please!
Thank you for writing

~Sistine~

Lol, Demi. I'm glad that I can be of service. And I love reviewing wonderful stories. I sit up at night and fall asleep thinking about the stuff I read on here.
I'm glad Damian's mom is cool with them being in love and all. Oh, and I keep forgetting to tell you, you do a wonderful job with pacing. You spend the perfect amount of time on developing relationships and make subtle reminders about the main problem.
Can't wait for the next update!
Still cheering you in (and providing you with crack),
Tsuki.

Their Mom is so cool with the whole twinscest thing! I bet there are about of people in the same boat who would love a Mom like here!
Kyle is cruel making his darling brother wear a maid costume to the party, especially as he's likely to get jumped on for being to sexy. Maybe the boys should kiss and make up but it would be safer to lose the frock or things could send up getting physical and steamy at the party.

It's a good prologue. Nice entering into the story, like a prologue should. Definitely captures attention.

Just might want to get into the characters heads a little more, add more detail to what they're thinking and that will make it twice as interesting to read. Simple stuff.

^_^

*wolf whistles* wow, shame mom showed up and interupted! I love the 'lie' for a cover story, you just can't beat such an unexpeted truth when your being pressed for info.