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| the big crunch 2008-05-12 ch 1,  | abusedear God! haha. I don't really listen to FOB that much, but my friend Helen... does? you could actually consider it an obsession. she cried the whole day at school when someone told her that Patrick was getting married to some girl. she put two others and i through misery for the whole day. and then she found out it wasn't true. she'd faint if she were Jen. Its a great fanfic, really. I liked the POV switching. I only saw one typo in the first half od the story, but I gorget where, sorry, ;o anyways, it was good. -jianna |