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| Ck90 2008-07-02 ch 7,  | abuseHi, Yeah it's me again. Let's just say that i want to clear the fact that I was not insulting your story, I was just curious and now I'm confused, seriously! Happy Writing!! |
| Ck90 2008-07-02 ch 6, | abuseSorry I could not wait to finish reading I just have to express my feelings. He is a grade A DICKHEAD, **, JERK, iDIOT, I can't even come up with enough insults for that **head he is impossible to love, How can he do that to her and no one cares. or better yet hwo could he do that with no remorse. I wish he would die! I'm sorry for ranting like this, I am not insulting you or your story, just wondering how this falls into romance, really just curious and i wish I could murder the BASTARD! Happy Writting I meant it!! |
| Bloodsave 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseHey I love the story, though im not too sure about the last chapter, it just didn't make sence in my mind. However keep on writing it will be interesting how this turns out. |
| notwithoutyou 2008-06-03 ch 13, | abuseUpdate please! I hope Eva changes her mind. Her and Draven should be together, even thoug he was cruel and raped her.. okay that doesn't sound as wonderful as I thought but... I LOVE ROMANCES! Just update please :) |
| dreamercrys 2008-05-30 ch 13, | abuseYou evil evil woman...I love it but how could you make her so mean? |
| If looks could kill. 2008-05-15 ch 13, | abuseok that was just mean!! but i love it...update soon! |
| AllSpark 2008-05-15 ch 13, | abuseI'm not sure if I should cheer on Eva or feeling heartbroken for Draven. The last chapter were little too fast, but I can't wait to see how it all will turn out. |
| Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-05-14 ch 9, | abusethis is really good! |
| cath2356 2008-05-14 ch 13, | abusewow. that really turned around. did you have that all the chapters already written cause if you wrote and posted 13 chapters in 2 days you are amazing. Cathy |
| hazza1508 2008-05-14 ch 13, | abusereally sad bout this chapter not sure if its the end or not but i really didnt lyk how she treated draven i mean he was meant to be the mean one and then she turned out to be a cold hearted **. I mean going through all thats really harsh and draven fell in love with her how could she do that to him yeah they started out rocky but to go through all that crap to pay him out is just way way way over the top. Was a really good story till this chap better luck next time |
| atreyu love 2008-05-14 ch 10, | abusei love the story :) but still, he was abusive to her ;( not cool. PLEASE UPDATE~ |
| CRAZY FOR APPLES 2008-05-14 ch 10, | abuseGreat! Your doing an amazing job!! And wow all the updates..totally made my day Keep them coming |
| If looks could kill. 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abusethis story is really good!! it's like i want her to get away from him because he is an **, but i want him to shape up and prove himself to her...thanks for updating so quickly!! keep going please |
| kris89 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abusewhat kind of man beats on a girl. i hope in the later chapters he gets his ** handed to him. i won't be supprised if she runs away. more power to her. |
| atreyu love 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseinteresting :D |