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Reviews For: Don't Cry For Me

Christian Chick
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abuseThis is amazing and very relatable. I especially loved the lines "to his garden of beautiful souls." Incredible imagery there and great word choice. I love it!
simpleplan13
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseI'm kinda confused why only the first stanza is not italicized... that just seems odd.

I do like this piece a lot because it flows well and it's very relatable. I also like the ellipses because they fit well since it's kinda like they trailed off into death, if that makes sense. Nice piece and I'm sorry for your loss.


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BananaFelix
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI applaud you gallantly for not making such a subject cliche or over dramatic. The concept of losing someone yet staying strong in such a dramatic experience really plays well with the subtlety you presented it with. It was a pleasure reading it.
kloun doll
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abusethe message in this is sad by the way, I think the chorus is the powerful part, sometimes you don't want to cry for not hurting anybody.
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