You should have finished it...LOL. Its good. Blast! I like it, I am already a strong writer now in the eleventh grade. Yet I wish to be strong as you one day. Keep up the good work, I thought the guy was Jack the Ripper. I assumed this, until the theme of the elementals had light shedded upon them. Keep up the good work, message me PLEASE, when there is another chapter. Bye! Oh yes, I won't be writing till late this June. I need a break, but I would love to read your work. (I have been writing and working on my work since you read was a big deal.) I reviewed, bye. :)

Very...weird. in a good way. You should try using more dialoge to explain the plot and your characters more though, than just explaining it in paragraphs. That would help to develop your story. Also, it was kind of confusing,and seemed sorta rushed toward the end. You should take the time to let the story unfold itself and maybe add more in your chapters.

Interesting, interesting. I wanna read more...

Also, your summary hooked me in. good job

-nicola