Reviews for Fatal Attraction - FictionPress.com

AK the Twilight 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseGood poem. Many of the lines feel a bit cliche, though. I don't seem to see the connection between the "born in death" line and the rest of the poem. This is good, but it doesn't feel too original. If you can, patch this one up a bit with some inventive imagery, because overall, this just feels a bit flat. Good job, though.
Nemonus 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseThe last line changes this poem entirely, marking the loftiness (loftiness is good) of the first few lines as a fantasy, which packs quite a punch. This is more prose-poetry than anything rhythmic, but if you meant it to be that, that's fine. "You are the humour in my heart" is pretty good, as is the high-fantasy sounding names. Interesting perspective, writing from the dark character's POV, but there wasn't enough plot that I could really get a grip on what all the wistful emotion was about.
Aelfin 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseWow, Isca this is amazing =] I feel exactly the same way about the girl i keep writing about ^^ Reading your poetry means so much to me, its like a lifeline and you have such a way with words! Through your lovely reviews and your beautiful poetry i feel like i almost know you, and you've read things i dont share with anyone, so you clearly know me better than anyone else XD Also, im currently trying to firgure out how too reply to your reviews :P I'm afraid i'm not very good with technology Aelfi x
McKinley Cooper 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful... McKinley