Reviews for a pain that isn't figuritive

sporty southern rockin gal 2008-05-14 ch 1,	abuseI know how you feel. I really like the symbolism that you use-it's dark adn somber. Again, who are these about?
stained blue 2008-05-14 ch 1,	abusei don't like the last stanza, everything else was nice though. the second stanza was the strongest, i think.
Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseyeah the ending's could be better, but you've got a good going. keep it up ^_^