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Reviews For: The Heart and the Brain

Ramenluver
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abuseCute, comical, and teaches a great lesson. :) I love it, haha.

-Ramen
Imalefty
2008-05-25
ch 1,
abusestraight from the review marathon! (link in profile)

i like this. :) it's simple and told in the style of a fable, and also has some connection with real life... logic vs emotions. i thought it was really well done. :)

i wasn't sure about brain trying to talk to other body parts, though... that was a little strange and didn't quite fit in with the rest of the piece.

otherwise, great job. keep writing!

-Lefty
Gavia Immer
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was really incredible and well written. I liked the simple style of writing so that people don't get lost in over-dramatic words and end up getting the moral of the story.
Cniht-Autor
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuse:)

I enjoyed reading this. -Is at a loss for words-

Sadly, it's all too often when the seemingly-impregnable wall around heart takes too long to wear out in the real world. Therefore, I'm glad about the (semi-)happy ending. Brain, stuffy as it may be, really needs hope after all.

Anyway. Thank you very much for posting this story. :)
earthspirit94
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseIt's a realy good leson through the story I love it! XD
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