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| Ramenluver 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseCute, comical, and teaches a great lesson. :) I love it, haha. -Ramen |
| Imalefty 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abusestraight from the review marathon! (link in profile) i like this. :) it's simple and told in the style of a fable, and also has some connection with real life... logic vs emotions. i thought it was really well done. :) i wasn't sure about brain trying to talk to other body parts, though... that was a little strange and didn't quite fit in with the rest of the piece. otherwise, great job. keep writing! -Lefty |
| Gavia Immer 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was really incredible and well written. I liked the simple style of writing so that people don't get lost in over-dramatic words and end up getting the moral of the story. |
| Cniht-Autor 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuse:) I enjoyed reading this. -Is at a loss for words- Sadly, it's all too often when the seemingly-impregnable wall around heart takes too long to wear out in the real world. Therefore, I'm glad about the (semi-)happy ending. Brain, stuffy as it may be, really needs hope after all. Anyway. Thank you very much for posting this story. :) |
| earthspirit94 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseIt's a realy good leson through the story I love it! XD |