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| Isca 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuse"I'll remember these days differently than you." Nice piece! |
| Ashelin 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseYou write small segments. They are like little thoughts, sort of almostsecrets you don't really plan on giving this person, but you scrawl down. Just thoughts thoughts thoughts. I suppose you could call it poetry, but you can call anything poetry, can't you? Not "you" as in YOU, but "you" as in us, humanity, people in general. It's sort of like art. What is art? What is poetry? Words? Pictures? A sort of being? *shrugs* I'm filling this review with my own thoughts, sorry. I still think this is more thoughts than poetry, but then again I'm an imagery **. It's what I do. It's rather disgusting and disturbing. At least you have meaning behinds yours. So good job. And good luck with the reinvention. Personally I think real love isn't something invented, it's there and waiting to be put into use. I suppose how we look at it is what makes it love. Nevermind, this is just a tangent. Ignore me. Good job. |