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Searon 2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Short. Crazy.

But good.
chibivy 2009-02-12 . chapter 1
Wow. What a nice haiku!

This is the fist haiku that I've read because I'm not into them that much.

Though haikus are short, your seemed to be very much detailed. I love it. =D

Great job.

~ioLanthe
Su.Flora.Bunny 2008-12-27 . chapter 1
I really did enjoy this, it kept me yearning for more. I love the thought and meaning put into this that almost paints a picture in your mind.
ghghg 2008-12-27 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. Nice job
Iccle Fairy 2008-12-18 . chapter 1
great haiku. very simple but effective!
wreckless.and.jealous 2008-12-15 . chapter 1
I like the first two parts of the poem, but I think the last line is kinda out of place. -(Sorry!)
Breathing Death 2008-11-26 . chapter 1
Wonderful~
An Apple Bleeds At Twilight 2008-11-02 . chapter 1
Simple and lovely. I can imagine little fairies whispers caught in the raindrops calling to the children to come and play. Not much to comment on because its so short but it is well done.

- AABAT
ghostgurl7 2008-10-19 . chapter 1
Well done. Alot f meaning in a few words, although couldve used more detail. other wise, nicely done:) ghostgurl
TearsFromWillowStreet 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
This might be stupid advise (SP?) but I would move the and on ' beckon us to play' down onto that line. It kinda sounds more formal that way to me.
Eagle Seance 2008-09-09 . chapter 1
Very beautiful lines, if they are meant to show separate sections of one idea. I would've said 'they trickle into our ears' in the second line (when you say 'whisper in our ears' it doesn't really make sense). Other than that, very nice. I like the last line as well.
Wolven Lied 2008-08-23 . chapter 1
Blissful~

I really like this. I think it has special meaning, at least to me, because I love the rain. Keep writing :)
alittlebitconfused 2008-08-10 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. It feels so... free and blissful. You convey the message so well, and with only seventeen syllables, that's hard.
I love the connection between the rain and teardrops.
It's amazing.

~Me
Tranquil Thorns 2008-08-03 . chapter 1
What a lovely haiku.

This reminds me of childhood and childish optimism, a time where everything in the world seems magic. I'm not sure how else to describe how this haiku made me feel, but it's a very nice sensation.
fatbird33 2008-08-01 . chapter 1
i liked the word beckon. it's rarely used and i think it should be because it's quite an awesome word.
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