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| BloodyAutumnKisses 2008-05-14 ch 2,  | abuseHey, little one! Now...WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF ENDING IS THAT! I saw you scribbling in that damn notebook like a madwoman! Update right the hell now! You finally manage to pull some decent, mostly logically insane writing out your ass and you leave it like that! Was that review good enough for you? Really though (I know I'm bipolar, yes), I think the story's great. You've got me wondering, and really questioning if you'll do this or this. And you already know how I feel about the random goth dude in a world of sunshine, rainbows and ponies. HE TOTALLY KICKS ASS, THAT's WHAT! He can fry me ANYTIME! |
| Obsidianstar 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseLMFAO! omg, it's halarious! i love ur dream idea...just not so sure on what zade is supposed to be yet, just develop Zade a bit more and it'll all be like an amazing reading orgasm. lmfao =) but i love it. lol l8erz |
| misery sister 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It was pretty interesting, and I liked your references. Although, I think you could space out your long paragraphs and separate them into two or three smaller ones - so you don't get your readers lost in the big blob of text. Good luck! |