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HaWtHrOnEhEiGhTsLoVeR 2008-08-24 ch 12, anon.	abuseOMG i really starting to love this story. I wonder what will happen between Tyler and Jessica. I hope they get back together. Uh oh derek out of jail that cant be good but i cant wait to see wat happens. Oh yeah will tyler join back up with the band or is he really finished. PS: Update soon plz
Jaeiyola 2008-08-23 ch 12,	abuseWoah. Ty's quitting the band? It's his dream. Wow, so much drama. And Derek's out. Dun-dun-dun. Can't wait for the next.
Classychik 2008-08-20 ch 11,	abusethis is an awesome story, I love this sequel just as much as the first story. Update soon! :) ClasSy CHiK!:D
Jaeiyola 2008-08-19 ch 11,	abuseGive it in, Jessie! And go Ty for being so awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Navaura 2008-08-15 ch 10,	abuseHey, Ms. Collins, you had a couple of mistakes in this chapter. Something akin to spelling. I don't think Jess realizes how much she unwinds around ty. He makes her relax and be comfortable around her surroundings. That's what's going to trip her up again. She's going to trip out when she discovers her fears aren't worth holding on to. That's all they are, are fears. She doesn't want to be hurt, so she uses him being a musician as an excuse. Well, I have to go and I love the chapter. I am along for the ride on this one. Navaura~
Jaeiyola 2008-08-14 ch 10,	abuseYay! That was enjoyable. I'm glad Jess and Ty are "semi"-together. It won't be long soon until they are offically together. Mwhahahaha. They're such a cute couple, and I hate seeing Ty suffering like that. Oohh, that mysterious car. Sounds dangerous. (Or it could just be my imagination.) Can't wait for more. :)
ashtonaesthetic 2008-08-10 ch 9,	abusePlease hurry with an update. Your story has kept me up all night trying to read all of it. So what? This may be a rough chapter but all books have them. Haven't you ever noticed? It's just a way of life for stories I guess. haha. Please update soon. I cant wait to read what happens. Oh and yeah about the no ideas thing... You probably just have a bit of writers block. I always just take a brek, experience some things and that helps... ALOT. And if that doesn't work, go somewhere quiet where the enviroment just screams creativity. That always gets the mind turning.
Navaura 2008-08-10 ch 9,	abuseIt was a needed chapter, considering the fact that Jess's mother was getting married and all. There was nothing more to be done with Ty and Jess, considering that Jess decided she wasn't going to be with Ty. Chill out and relax, your story's going at the right pace. Don't worry about the ideas, they will come. Sometimes, you have to get through the hard chapters, in order to get a complete thought worked out. So, youre doing fine. Navaura~
WindUpWillie 2008-08-03 ch 8,	abusemore more more!! awesome story!!
Navaura 2008-08-03 ch 8,	abuseI may seem heartless for this one, but, I don't feel sorry for Mike. Maybe I should. I don't know, but I feel more relieved myself because Jessi was honest with him, which created more respect for her from me.(Mike wouldn't get his heart broke in the end. That is an inevitable conclusion.) Atleast she has the guts to say what she needed too. I almost swooned when I read the part where Ty's determination shined through. Jess+ Ty forever. I like that, because it shows his seriousness, when going after the girl he really wants. So, yay! Two thumbs up for Ty. I also like Jess's friend. She's pretty cool. So, congrats on chapter eight!
Lazy_Logger 2008-07-30 ch 7, anon.	abuseaw i want them 2gether :(
sarah!! 2008-07-30 ch 7, anon.	abuseawseome chppies =]
Navaura 2008-07-29 ch 7,	abuseI love this chapter, don't worry about me, I'm too solid-stuck in the real life to argue with that- in life to believe a fairy tale ending. I just wish to encourage you to keep it as real as possible, no fancy fickles if you know what I mean. I absolutely Love Ty's declaration of love for Jess. I also liked the fact that she's willing to give up what she wants, for what he wants. It tells you the maturity of her character. When a woman really loves a man, she's willing to let go of him, even if it means being hurt in the process. All's well, that ends well, if that makes any sense. I have a question: How is it that you know where to put every moment in your story where it's supposed to be? Food for thought. This was a beautiful chapter. I could feel every emotion the characters felt. Which means, this chapter had a lot of depth to it! #1 fan, Navaura
Unknown 2008-07-28 ch 6, anon.	abuseawesome! i can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Navaura 2008-07-27 ch 6,	abuseI got one thing to say, YOU BETTER FINISH THIS STORY, IF YOU DON'T, I MIGHT DIE!11 THIS CHAPTER WAS NOT TOO LONG. I WAS HOPING THEY'D MEET IN THIS CHAPTER. BUT IT'S GOOD, REALLY GOOD, EXCEPT FOR A FEW MISTAKES MADE AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTER. THE USUAL, ONE LEFT OUT LETTER, COMMA PLACEMENT, STUFF LIKE THAT, BUT AWESOME! I LOVE IT, AND AS FOR YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN, I LOOK FOR AN UPDATE EVERY DAY. I CHECK THE MAIL HOPING FOR AN UPDATE, SO HAH! YOU GOTTA FINISH. TRUST ME, IT'S WORTH IT #1 FAN NAVAURA~

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