that that’s the kind of person who I am.. the two thats sounded a bit awkward

I also love how you compare love with oxygen, but without doing it like a cliche

We can we/can always... I felt like a comma was needed there

That ending was interesting... comparing life to clothing. I liked it because it was very unique.

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