Wow. This was beautiful. Most erotic things I read are just...dirty, but this was gorgeously and tastefully done, and thus effective in stirring me. My favorite part: "His breath is hot, subtle on the crevice of my neck. I shiver from the breeze. He pulls me closer. He holds fast onto my belly like I’ll leave him. He pushes a strong leg between my thighs. I inhale. He feels my chest rise and rests a casual hand beneath my left nipple where it’s soft and even paler. His fingers smell like me." You described the feeling of a man sleeping beside a woman perfectly...right down to the trivial, private details that people never talk about but always can say they recognize. I'll be back for more reading!

wow...what a beautiful piece. Elegant and yet raw in technique - very enjoyable.

So complex with such simplicity. I thought you did a fabulous job. It read really well.